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Nice meeting you! by Taly5
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Well I must say, this is my first critique. Okay, I could automatically tell you found this dude hard to draw. He looks to seductive to...

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Yuu thought he hadn't heard right.
"Why are you sorry?!" Yuu bolted upright.
"Because, I am really an asshole, Yuu! I knew it, I knew that something bad was going to happen to you that night. Yet I gave you the benifit of the doubt, and looked what happened. To my best friend--rape?!" Makoto cried. He rarely cried, and when he did it was moving. "I should have followed you. I hate libraries, but my love for you is greater than t--"
"Run that by me again," Yuu began to tremble.
At first Makoto looked confused. Then he blushed, and made this nevermind hand gesture. Yuu wasn't going down that easily.
"Run that by me again."
"No," Makoto said quietly, and more tears began to fall.
"Run that by me again," Yuu said more sternly.
"Yuu, even when your sick you are still the stubborn bastard I know." Makoto said warily. "Alright. I love you okay. I know you aren't a fan of boys who fall for boys, but I love you. Maybe these are just hormones, I hope they are."
Silence ensued. The only thing that Yuu could hear was his own heart beating. Makoto loved him? What the hell? Yuu never noticed it. He didn't notice any changes in his friend's behavior around him. The only thing was he had caught Makoto staring at him, more than once--but Makoto always daydreamed.
Yuu's eye's filled with tears.
"..and now, you've been violated! Damn, if I'da been there, that punk would have been pummeled!" Makoto continued.
"Makoto, I'm sorry, but I don't feel the same way," Yuu turned then and looked at his friend.
He still looked the same. Makoto, the boy who's hair was once brown--now blonde. The boy who got all the girls--the dirty ones and the clean ones. The boy who kissed him in first grade. The boy who vowed...vowed...to be his bestest friend no matter what. Yuu Kashitaro didn't want that to change...it couldn't. But now, he was afraid that his words would change everything.
"I know dude," Makoto said softly. "I know your straight, and I know I'm straight--I honestly think it's the hormones. Or the way you look. I actually looked at you for the first time in sixth grade, and noticed that you looked exactly like a girl, so pale, so weak...sexy or something. I haven't felt like this for any other guy...only you and I knew it wasn't going to work. I'm not hurt about this, I'm hurt that you've been hurt. Mentally, physically," Makoto got this far away look for a split second--rememberence, "and it'll be a lond time before you recover. I'm sorry--I indirectly put you through it all, Yuu."
"Not only you Makoto," Yuu turned away. "Me and my body. Even I doubted that Rin would have the guts to do this, but he did and always would have. You can't, couldn't have protected me forever. I never told when I should have. I am partly to blame. Don't be beat yourself up over it."
Yuu suddenly felt very tired. Makoto sensed and picked up his bag.
"I guess I will visit you tomorrow, dude."
"Ah-huh," Yuu mumbled.
"Yuu, I think I know why that Rin guy did this to you..." Makoto said seriously.
"Nn?"
"Your dad married that guy's mother."

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Titilayo
Artist | Student | Digital Art
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Uh, I'm a girl. I like Lady Gaga and stuff. Please Love Me. I have been drawing ever since I was nine years old and my pen name for when I become a shounen mangaka is Maki Kurosaki (what you saw earlier).
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KyeTamm Mar 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks for the favvv!! :dummy: :la:
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lady-storykeeper Mar 6, 2014  Professional Artist
Thanks for the fave :icon--bunnyplz:
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StarryKnightStudio Dec 31, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks so much for the fave~ ^^
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DemonChroniclesOwner Jan 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ur welcome
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meebub Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*Waves* yo
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DemonChroniclesOwner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hey oh my god!!! I haven't been on deviant art in a millennia!!!! I am so sorry, meebub-kun. I hope you haven't forgotten about me!!! I love you!!! I am so gonna start updating my deviant art with more drawings. I got in trouble thats why I haven't been on.
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meebub Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yoooooo
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DemonChroniclesOwner Oct 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hey!! I am back!
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Thlipsi Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you for the watch!
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kern24 May 1, 2013  Student Writer
[link] something closer to this. He grows more hair on his face and hands but keeps a relativly human shape.
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lazy-Time Mar 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thx for the fav and the great comment :iconcraiplz:
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DemonChroniclesOwner Mar 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ur welcome.
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cold-nostalgia Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
!!!nivaf rof sknaht

(backwards???)
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DemonChroniclesOwner Feb 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
!!!emoclew rU
(luckily I can read backwards girl)
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lady-storykeeper Jan 20, 2013  Professional Artist
thanks for the fave :D
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DemonChroniclesOwner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
ur welcome.
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kern24 Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
ok its kyle. I know im late sorry but i was really bad like dead sick yesterday I will be going to your party
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bocook1515 Jan 11, 2013  Student Photographer
Happy birthday
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DemonChroniclesOwner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Awh, thank you!! I haven't been on deviant art in like two weeks, I didn't think anyone would care!!
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bocook1515 Jan 15, 2013  Student Photographer
You're welcome. I bet there was a lot of people that wished you happy birthday..:^__^
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